Inspired by Royston Tan's Mother, Our Story tells the tale of lost love, despair and confessions of a young man, to his girl after several painful years of remorse.
The film is made only by the combination of still photographs and video effects.
2009 / Singapore / Director and Writer.
Watch, comment, rate and enjoy!
please watch with earpiece and full screen, for full effects.
and also, let the film load til the end to keep the mood going.
it will only take you 2 minutes.
thanks.
please leave a comment here, after watching okay?
tell me what do you think of it of the clip.
and also at least, ask one of your friend to watch it?
all help appreciated!
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ReplyDeletehahaha...
listened to dharfianto's voice...
XD~
nice short movie :)
hehehe...
got the 'atmosphere' i can say :)
Work harder!! hahaha...
but put more human in your video :P hahaha...
By: FRANZ!
LOL quite good... got feel.... jus the voice not very clear...=D
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walaupun kata orang video lu jelek, menurut gw tetep bagus-bukan karena gw tau proses pembuatannya atau karena gw ada maunya sama lu e.g. essay n script hehehe
ReplyDeletegw seneng karena video ini bener2 tulus dan mencerminakan dharfianto kiang wei lun :) gw juga seneng krn lu di project ini bisa ngelakuin apa yg bener2 lu suka :)
-maaf ya, gw bawel heheh
background music too loud le...
ReplyDeleteCannot really hear wat the narrator's saying..
maybe the narrator can slower his speech, so as to let the audience really understand/feel the whole stuffs... (ie... i need to focus both the pic and the voice... so a bit distracting)
Add more emotion to speech will be better...
but dont overdo it...
Overall, not bad! i just focus on those point that you may wanna to improve.
summary of wat i've mentioned earlier!
ReplyDelete- volume of music is too loud
- ur speech is too fast, gotta put more feel so pp can get to feel ur story
the music and effect is gd! blends in well with the story. great effort!
dharfianto kiang oh may gooooossshhh! oh my goooooosshhh! i crieeeeeeeeddddd! :( super saaaad! coolioooo, keep up the good wooorrrkkk, maaannn! ceke ike liangke puyao xiexie!
ReplyDeletehaha. thanks to everyone for supporting!
ReplyDeletethis really helps in my struggles in filmmaking.
(although i pestered a few people to leave comment(
The good thing I can see is u are learning a lot of effects and making good use of it.
ReplyDeleteNow, the negative.. Plain, a bit draggy, lack of smt in the voice.
The voice part sound too directly recorded. It will be great to record in with some beauty of the nature. Likes the nice sound of waves..
The background music u can slowly fake softer and softer.. Another emotion effect I guess?
Anyway, Good Effort! Oh! A black and white photo of a pretty girl would be nice! Hahaz. This one is crap.
so..romantic....!! for people kind of poetical...but,,not for me...hehe..
ReplyDeletethis the best second movie..that u made...
the first is YELLOW...haha..
but,,u still uncle horny.....
eeuuuuwwww....
-bibir-
kuku, the video is nice ok.!
ReplyDeletemake even better film next time.
this film is about u and doraemon right?
i feel ur pain of her leaving you.
background music can be softer, abit distracting thou' but the effort is there yea.!haha (:
the narration is too staccato...drag it a little! but nice choice of background music!
ReplyDeleteNice lyrics and shots taken! good job dharf lol.
ReplyDeleteHelo didi!!...
ReplyDeleteoverall the whole video is nice...
e pics are well taken n the effects are GOOD!..
NICE Background music...
ah...but u need to practise narrating with more emotions...too flat liao...haha...need ups and downs like e music u had picked...
it would be better with ur lines & emotions can flow with e music...
ah...like some part e piano is more aggresive so maybe u can at that pt narrate in a more 'chong dong' manner..haha
so can hav more impact & move more hearts...haha...
JIAYOU didi!!...U CAN de!!..=]
~ YANZ ~